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 #8587  by lincoln
 Wed Dec 26, 2012 12:55 pm
Although I have been a member for a while, I haven't written in the forum before, so perhaps it's time to share some of my thoughts this far. Please bear with me if this post is getting way too long, hopefully there will be some good points hidden in there...

First of all, I must say thank you for a really great site and a great concept. WIN and Weird Wanks is really something special, indeed... Most of the scenes here are great, and some are even better still...

However, nothing is perfect, so here are a few suggestions to make them even better. At least in my own opinion, of course ...

1) The most distinguishing feature that separates this site from the rest of the "regular" porn out there is the sense of interactivity in the scenes. There are two things that creates this illusion:

a) The girl isn't talking to a male actor, but directly to me as a viewer.
b) This site acknowledges and is even proud of the fact that the members are here to do one thing, and one thing only: watch porn and jerk off to it - It's not porn to watch
with your girlfriend or wife, but to jerk off to on your own. No excuses...

The most important part in the scenes are therefore the ending, where the girl encourages me as a viewer to cum. That's why I am a bit surprised that many of the scenes are absolutely great, right up to the end, where they often are turning into a bit of an anticlimax.

In too many of the scenes the ending is too sudden and abrubt, in my opinion. The girl encourages me to jerk during the scene, and then suddenly right out of the blue, often without a warning, there is a quick cumshot, or the girl just says something like "I hope you came. See you next time". Or like in the countdown endings, where the girl counts down: "three... two... one...", but instead of then saying something like "ok, cum now, oh yeah, thats good, oh, keep cumming..." during the time that I actually are cumming, which would be a major turn on, by the way, she suddenly stops on "one.." and says "I hope you had a nice wank", and then the scene ends, which leaves me reaching jerking climax to the the ending credits instead.

Those endings are way too abrupt, and a bit of a disapointment, in my opinion. They break the illusion that the girl actually is speaking to and encouraging ME, since I can't cum in the "right" place of the scene where she is telling me to cum, thus making the whole scenario setup a bit pointless.

I would really, really prefer that the girl would talk and encourage the viewer to cum, all the way through, so to speak, instead. When the countdown reaches one, I want her to encourage me to cum, and keep at it until I am done. In the scenes without a countdown I would like her to ask "Are you ready to cum?" or say "just let me know when you are ready. You want to cum now? Ok, blow your load. Do it now." to give me a heads up so I can cum while she talks me through it.

Afterwards, she can say the regular things like "Was it good?", "Oh, wow, that was a big load", "I can't belive you did that!", "Hurry up, get out of here" or whatever she use to say, but not until she has talked me through the climax.

Maybe it's just me, but that way this site would go from great to mindblowing, in my opinion.

2) I espeacially like the scenes that ends with a cumshot in general, and particulary those with facials (cum in the mouth and on the tounge are the very best ones...) or the rare scenes that ends with a cumshot over the girl's pussy. It adds a lot of authenticity to the scenes, and make them feel both more realistic and more exciting.
This subject has already been discussed in the forum a lot of times, and as I understand from your earlier answers, the facial scenes are a bit tricky to shoot (pun unintended...) since they mess up the make up and hair of the girls.

Of course I respect an understand that, but none the less I think it would improve the site even more if there were more regular facial scenes. It's something I actually really do miss here, and one of the very few major drawbacks in this site, compared to "regular" mainstream porn.

Letting the girl take the load in the mouth, and not so much in the face - can that perhaps be a solution that doesn't mess up the hair of the model?

Another nice feature would be to see the girl once in a while play a bit with the cum in her face, mouth, or on her breasts, her hands or on her pussy. (A girl masturbating with the cum still on her pussy would be really, really great, by the way...)

3) Speaking of cumshots, another suggestion that already has been mentioned before as well, is double cumshots. There is an american site called manojob which has a great feature I would really love to see here:

The girls there jerk of the guy from a pov angle and eventually takes the load in the face. Instead of ending the scene there, like in regular porn, the girl, now with cum dripping down her face and tounge, turns to the viewer and says something like "now it's your turn to blow your load" and then encourages the viewer to jerk off in her face too, cum still dripping out of her mouth while she is doing it. It's a major turn on, and something I would really love here at WIN on regular basis. I am sure you could make it even better...
 #8594  by nVq5gh
 Fri Dec 28, 2012 1:49 am
lincoln wrote:In too many of the scenes the ending is too sudden and abrubt, in my opinion. The girl encourages me to jerk during the scene, and then suddenly right out of the blue, often without a warning, there is a quick cumshot, or the girl just says something like "I hope you came. See you next time". Or like in the countdown endings, where the girl counts down: "three... two... one...", but instead of then saying something like "ok, cum now, oh yeah, thats good, oh, keep cumming..." during the time that I actually are cumming, which would be a major turn on, by the way, she suddenly stops on "one.." and says "I hope you had a nice wank", and then the scene ends, which leaves me reaching jerking climax to the the ending credits instead.
I agree with this bit, that often not enough time is given to cum. Mind you I think it has improved over time, it's mostly the old scenes that ended abruptly.

I'm not into cumshots so can't comment on the rest.
 #8612  by ThreeFold
 Sun Dec 30, 2012 7:01 am
I too think that some changes to the endings would be good. Some sort of interaction after the girl makes you cum rather than just cutting to the outro.

With the cumshots point I get that some of the girls don't do it, but I think the focus should be getting the girls who do and who do higher levels to do it on a more consistent basis. It is a little confusing that one scene a girls is really dirty and in the next quite tame.
 #8689  by admin
 Thu Jan 10, 2013 7:11 pm
ThreeFold wrote:I too think that some changes to the endings would be good. Some sort of interaction after the girl makes you cum rather than just cutting to the outro.

With the cumshots point I get that some of the girls don't do it, but I think the focus should be getting the girls who do and who do higher levels to do it on a more consistent basis. It is a little confusing that one scene a girls is really dirty and in the next quite tame.


Noted :D
 #28396  by BigTitsOnGlass
 Thu Jun 27, 2019 10:55 am
lincoln wrote:In too many of the scenes the ending is too sudden and abrubt, in my opinion. The girl encourages me to jerk during the scene, and then suddenly right out of the blue, often without a warning, there is a quick cumshot, or the girl just says something like "I hope you came. See you next time". Or like in the countdown endings, where the girl counts down: "three... two... one...", but instead of then saying something like "ok, cum now, oh yeah, thats good, oh, keep cumming..." during the time that I actually are cumming, which would be a major turn on, by the way, she suddenly stops on "one.." and says "I hope you had a nice wank", and then the scene ends, which leaves me reaching jerking climax to the the ending credits instead.

Could not possibly agree more, this is the most frustrating thing in the entire JOI genre.

All this buildup and then silence and then "wow that was big load", ahh what?

1. Countdown - After a count down gets to one say "CUM!" seems obvious to me but so often doesn't happen.

2. Say it again - As lincoln said telling me to cum once is good but telling me again and again as I cum is much much better. Telling me to drain my balls, using different terms like pump that load or shoot that sperm..

https://www.wankitnow.com/modelentry/georgie-lyall/ is a great at this :twisted:
 #28412  by wolfy
 Fri Jun 28, 2019 4:57 pm
Some good points. I've expressed my opinions before, and some have made it to video, thankfully. The problem is as you say, the women just don't hold interest, are boring, and cannot really act well. Only a handful or less can. I aswell as others, are hoping and have requested loads of other models. The more the more diverse and better !
 #28416  by BigTitsOnGlass
 Sun Jun 30, 2019 2:10 pm
wolfy wrote:Some good points. I've expressed my opinions before, and some have made it to video, thankfully. The problem is as you say, the women just don't hold interest, are boring, and cannot really act well. Only a handful or less can. I aswell as others, are hoping and have requested loads of other models. The more the more diverse and better !

Just want to clarify that is not what I am saying at all. The girls are great with lots of great dirty talk its just the finish and as noted that being a pretty important part is often lacking, and it pretty much all boils down to telling you to cum.. and more than once, that is all.
 #28759  by stixvr
 Sun Sep 08, 2019 6:47 pm
Im another who agrees with the OP. BUilding up to the end then, "oh that was nice" is a let down. I delete more than half of my WIN videos for this reason! Please please please listen to the original poster and take some pointers, Thanks guys we know your listening to us!!
 #28762  by BigTitsOnGlass
 Sun Sep 08, 2019 11:43 pm
stixvr wrote:Im another who agrees with the OP. BUilding up to the end then, "oh that was nice" is a let down. I delete more than half of my WIN videos for this reason! Please please please listen to the original poster and take some pointers, Thanks guys we know your listening to us!!

Whoa, that is not good..

Again I offer my cum linguistics coaching for free :)

Even during the buildup saying 'stroke' and 'cock' in that sexy British accent, and even 'cum' and 'explode' too to help the buldup..
 #28764  by BigTitsOnGlass
 Mon Sep 09, 2019 2:03 am
sirhumpalot wrote:As you know I am in complete agreement on this issue and have made my feelings known about the weak endings to a lot of videos. However, if there is one thing that really winds me up it's " EXPLODE ". I am sick to the back teeth of hearing girls say explode. " Are you going to explode, are your balls going to explode, explode all over me etc. Every time I can hear myself say, " IF I hear explode one more time I will ....ing explode. Please, no more explode. It's a silly and meaningless expression. Amber Jayne is one of my favourite girls and a fab talker but her last video was all " EXPLODE, EXPLODE!!!! ". Please, use another word. What on earth is wrong with changing explode for spunk or something.

Hahaha, fair enough, one more time you are going to EXPLODE!! :lol:

Just dates back to one really memorable scene that always sticks out in my mind and probably the first time I heard the word used, and that was by Kiki D’aire in Titty Fuckers #4 (2001).. "I want you to eeexxxplloooooooddee!!" and the way she said it was hot as fuck..

Ok so less explode and more 'pump that load' and 'shoot that spunk'! and already lent my support to your SPUNK campaign - viewtopic.php?f=14&t=5393

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